Awwwwwww.... that waz so cute so waz ^ tammie nothen much expect being board i wrote a new poem but it's not that good!!!!!!! well anyways i give u a 5/5 !!!!!!!!!!

sign, Rosie
xox

Great job.
I loved the ending.
Keep it up.

Great poem and the structure was terrific and creative...exactly wut i expect from u! u have some amazing skills and its great to watch u improve and write about so many different topics...nice flow and te ending was really good also...
thx for ur comments,
love ya lots,
sore

Oh how swift is the poem.
very fluid because of the good rhythm..

Wow i can relate to most of what you said in this. great job. i really like it a lot. really sad poem but a great one too 5/5

Nice job once again, i luv ur poems. 5/5

This was very good, i liked the repetition, and the ending summed it up perfectly, keep writing
much love, Tara-Kay