Comments : Ur gone already!

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Nice poem! The flow worked quite well and I understand very well what you mean with this poem. Although distant friendship may be hard and difficult, if you really loved each other you should try! Believe me, where theres a will theres a way! Keep writing...
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 18 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Sorry that, it isn't working out. but you might want him as a friend cause you never know what is down that road... Good poem, nicely strung together