The Poetic Suicide

by Unforgiven Retniap doolb   Jul 25, 2006


Click, Click...
Can you hear that sound?
Forte-piano
Another poet hitting the ground.

The poetic suicide,
with a letter so discouraging,
Which should be published,
but then suicide is encouraging.

However not ever poet is suicidal,
though there are select few,
could be closet buds,
or the roses everyone knew.

Either way they're dead,
no one will know their name,
had the emotion, the talent,
but gave up the fame.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    However not ever poet is suicidal
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    I think "Ever should be every"
    Just an opinion

    Other then that, i loved this poem it was definiteyl different, really unique i loved the imagery..it was filled with great emotions! great job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, it was different I can give you that much. Though it seemed like you just grabbed a bunch of ideas and crammed it into one. It was a good poem though. It just needs more thought. Rhymes and flow were good.

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