Forgiven

by I - O - W - A   Jul 25, 2006


Remember When We Used To Walk Along The Beach?
And Nothing Seemed So Out Of Reach?
And How We Used To Look Eachother In The Eye?
And WithOut A Word Make Eachother Cry?
With Tears Of Unrivaled Happiness
To Which I Now Forever Confess
That Although You Tore My World Apart
Without Noticing My Bleeding Heart
I Will Always Love You, Till The Day I Die
All That I Wish For Is Free You May Fly
And If One Day You Land Back By My Side
I Will Gladly Take You Along On My Ride
Because No Matter What.

You Are Forgiven, My Love

This Poem Was Wrote Just Now Because I Felt Like Writting Something Coz I Was On This Site, So Its Not Really Well Thought Out But I Think It Says What I Needs To Let Me Know What You Think

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  • 17 years ago

    by danielle

    Great job that poem was good and really sweet keep up the good work
    ~danielle~

  • 18 years ago

    by I - O - W - A

    Yeah thts a slight problem of mine lol i capitalze every letter if im typing fast, i type slower if i dont

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwww.. that was really sweet! the emotion is clear and your descriptions are beautiful.. the last two lines are strong yet soft and sweet at the same time.. the only thing that i think you should change is how you capitalize every letter.. i feel that you should only capitalize the first letter of every line, but that is just me.. nice job! 5/5

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