Remembering...

by Tormented   Jul 25, 2006


Looking up at the sky
Remembering our first converstion
On a dark lonely path,
Stars were there to shine the way
Where you and I once walked
Hand in hand, we smiled

Now there are no stars
The path is dark
I walk alone.
With gleaming tears in my eyes
I wonder what happened to us?
We dont even know...

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  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Amazing poem, i like how you made it simple which focused a lot of the readers attention on your emotions and pain! It was well written without a doubt! Loved it!

    Mwah

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats another sad poem! but well written you really got the talent :D

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww! Such a sad poem again! Short, and a bit of the flow was rocky, but other than that, it was good. Keep it up! =) xoxo 5/5

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This poem's so sad, and so well written. The beginning was my favorite part because I imagined everything you said, very sweet.

    Good job!

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I really liked how these two stanza contrasted. One happy, one sad. That really made this poem strong. Great effect, great write.

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