Wow nice poem....love the ending....i thought the whole till the end that it was a sport or something you so badly wanted to win but in the end its all about you and it makes complete since great poem :)

I loved it. you can see the pain and the scared feelings u were feeling when u wrote this... very good

Everybody, thank you SO much for such supportive comments. it honestly means the world to me. my poetry is always extremely personal, and someimtes people don't understand it, and think it's a bad poem. i write my poetry for myself. but thank you all SO much. this is one of those poems that you honestly pour your heart into when u write it, and thank ssoo much for the supportive comments. i can't even begin to tell you how much it means. and chloe, you are totally the best friend in the world. i lylas and thanks for all the amazing comments.

Wow, love this one. It's really deep and I can relate to it really well. Good job:)

-Bri

Idk what it is but i've been reading quite a few of your poems and if those are any thing about you then we have alot in common i really liked this one and thanks for the comment it means alot to me
~Danni~