Unable To Emote

by CinnamonTwirl   Jul 25, 2006


Im not sure if the words exist
To accurately describe how I feel for him
Its just too complex

Frustrated that my feeble brain isnt aware of the words
To tell me love, how I love him

My attempts at eloquent descriptions
fall short
And shallow statements emerge instead

My emotions, so strong, trapped in the pit of my stomach
Imprisoned by my lack of vocabulary

I guess Ill have to settle with "I Love You"

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I appreciate everyone's comments, this is the first poem I've written in about 8 months, and its about my boyfriend who I obviously love very much, thank you SO much

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  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Hmm there was not really any flow to this write at all! Some stanzas were lONg, some short. The structure really was not there, I don't think it was really any type of poem,
    sorry-
    ANN

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I often feel like this so its a poem i can relate to, the short stanzas really create the impression that you are lost for words, but the words you have used contain a lot of meaning and emotion.

    theres a wee spelling error in the fourth stanza, me should be my...

    -biscuit-

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