Comments : Unable To Emote

  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    I often feel like this so its a poem i can relate to, the short stanzas really create the impression that you are lost for words, but the words you have used contain a lot of meaning and emotion.

    theres a wee spelling error in the fourth stanza, me should be my...

    -biscuit-

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Hmm there was not really any flow to this write at all! Some stanzas were lONg, some short. The structure really was not there, I don't think it was really any type of poem,
    sorry-
    ANN