by Nelle Jul 25, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
other
I'm trying to smile and be the best person I can be |
by LostForever
I like this write, its really good, i can relate to it easily. xx |
Great poem! I love the repetition of ''I'm trying''--Also, I like how you have parellel structure in the last stanza--Amazing work, hun- |