This is good
yea sometime diffrent people are
better(i dont mean like their are better than everyone else)
but not involved so much in the world
that they can see what is really happening

I like this poem. Your very good

U really have a point here, and try to express it as much as u can, u got it, kepp it up and never stop!!

Very nicely written.

october xx

It made me get tears in my eyes. i love it.
Your great.