Life without you

by Syn   Jul 25, 2006


Life is to love,
like air is to breath.
Like god up above,
you have to believe.

Life without love is like,
Lungs without air,
No Whole-hearted freshness,
Just soft-spoken despair

Life without faith is like,
Living without sight,
Sure you can see,
But can you see the Light?

Life without you is like,
Me in my grave,
Drowning in sorrow,
Like before i was saved.

-Syn
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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Simple, genuine, captivating. loved it. <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Lenny

    Not my favourite of your works.
    First and second stanza were mind blowing, but the third! Let you down. If you can reword it to keep the flow constant then the whole piece would be terrific.

  • 18 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Wow, very well written. I think we all have felt that sentiment at one time or another. Very good tone,flow. excellent 5/5 Loretta

  • 18 years ago

    by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*

    Good job, nice emotions, and powerful word choice... keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow... deep and meaningful. could use a bit of work (the last stanza seemed a bit forced) but i still love it, as always. keep up the amazing work!
    -xXx-

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