Enclave (Cinquian)

by sibyllene Jul 25, 2006 category : Nature, environment / nature

Shyly
like russet deer
we drop footfalls around
the fire's heart, as its ring of light
protects

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18 years ago
by Natalie

Very nice Cinquian! Your choice of wording was great! I wouldn't change it at all. Keep it up! 5/5

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18 years ago
by goddess-glamourpuss

Hmm different. It's s nice little snapshot and says a lot for such a short piece. I don't know if it could be a bit longer or whether that would ruin it but the image is great.
18 years ago
by Chelsea

I found this very simple and yet very powerful...it was nice and unique

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