Carless

by ToTormentedToEvenCare   Jul 25, 2006


I died the day you told me you didn't love me
yet i was still alive
i was broken inside-out
like a withered butterfly
i waited for you like always
but you didn't bother to show up
i needed you, but you didn't care
i was sick and needed you
and you just walked away
i was lost and you closed the door on me
i don't hate you
i know, how foolish of me but you were the only one who ever
said "i loved you"

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  • 18 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey great poem!, i know knpw what its like to be in love then once he dumped u, realise he was playin u all along
    love mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Nathaniel

    This one hit home for me, keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jemma

    Wow. love this. love the ending. it is very effective

    Jem

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Thanks for the comment.........i love this poem i understand this one a lot!!

  • 18 years ago

    by AmazinglyEmpty

    Wow.. yes this is very true, because all our hearts are broken at some point, and always in a different way... very good

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