Thats very true in some ppl'z cases, they cant control themselves.. its sad.. and its bad that it happens... |
by Jemma
It's a sad poem but very truthful. it's a good poem. |
That very true and I like the way the pome is structured keep up the good work! |
by Nathaniel
I like your style in this poem, it was a complete story. You have done a really good job, keep it up! |
by Raychil
Very unique poem. It was a very good story and a good point on how easily people get addicted to drugs even by accident. I don't usually like free verse but I liked this one. Great job on it. |
This poem is amazing!!! yet so true!!! rock on!!! |
Thats good |
by Megan
I luv it...it's the best poem i've read bout peoples addictions to drugs...an it describez everything perfectly... |
Amazing job! im speechless! :) |