Oh my poor dom. u must be hurting so much right now. i wish i was there 4 u to cry on. i love u. nice poem too. 5/5.
love willow xxoo

Omg wow i lvoe it. its so sad. i kno how that is.. watching someone u care about so much be in so much pain that u cant help them.. im sorry that happened to u.. its a veyr good poem. it has a lot of emotion put in it.. i love ur poems.. keep writing and keep ur head up high dear 5/5
take care and stay strong
luve angie

Hey such a beautiful poem, ur a awsum poet keeep it up love mel