Well sorry you feel this way, especially when you have a knack for writing. By that I don't mean you're one of the greater ones but you put in effort to write as much as you possibly can, thus making you get better with each time.

Emmm sad feelings, and i must admit it that we all go through it, but don't forget after a dark night it is a sunny day.
as far as the peom goes,It is short but to the point.It is not one of your great one, but it is good.

Aww! Hun. This was so sad. I'm so sorry you feel like this. I'm here if you need me, kay? *hugs*

The poem was good though, it was short and straight to the point. Keep your head up, and smile. 5/5

Natalie``

Oh sweetheart. You do like to make me cry don't you?
This is really great though. I like the way you changed the tone of the whole thing just by changing the one word.
at least it ended onn a happy note.
Keep your chin up hun

Aww. I know how you feel. =( At times I wish I could just die, and never come back. Don't worry. You'll get through it =) If you need anyone to talk to, just PM me, and I'd be glad to talk. =)

OK...poem now lol. Flow was good, and the emotion was deep, but put into a simple form of poem. Great job! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha