Rusting Angels

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Jul 26, 2006


Fluttering crookedly across the sky,
Delicate wings never able to soar again,
These lost Rusting Angels pretend to fly.
They move awkwardly in swarms toward the moon,
To tell the astonished stars of their dreams,
While singing them such a mournful tune.
Our Rusting Angels break and fall,
Struggling their best to remain up tall.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    I loved this poem, even if it didnt follow the rhyme scheme... the only thing i would change tho is i would take out "up" in the last line... i can't believe how well you write poetry, it comes naturally to you. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Very dark, but soooo good i love your choice of words!!! Your an excellent writer!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ohhh. I liked this one. I love poems that have to do with Angels. I don't know why I just adore them. It was really nicely written with wonderful details.

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Rustng angels - that's a beautiful way of describing unlived lives.

    you have amazing talent and I feel bad having missed your writes all this while.

    great going!

    peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Hey...great poem...it had nice imagery...and it was really dark...i loved it..congrats on getting 1st in my contest...i loved the you poem you entered the moment i read it...and it with-held to be number 1...anyways...excellent job on this poem...5/5....i loved it.

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