Beatiful imagery and a very original poem.

'fluttering crookedly' great use of adjectives there, love it.

'astonished stars', excellent!

this really does paint a great picture :)

-biscuit-

Wow.. this was amazing.. i dont think i have ever read anything like that! it was so dark and eery.. wonderful descriptions and flowed brilliantly! 5/5

Wow, that was very powerful. I really felt the message hear which was clear, yet subtle. I loved the title, for me it suggested the point that angels are like statues and can rust in the elements. That's what I got, well done for making me think so deeply into it. Thanks and great work

That's short adn sweet and really quite good. The way you conveyed the images of a group of angels who ahev lost their touch and probably their purity was amazing.

I especially liked the lines "To tell the astonished stars of their dreams,
While singing them such a mournful tune." that was really really well written. i was astonished at your talent and truly didn't expect soemthing so short but brilliant. i love short poems, it's just so difficult to get them to say what you wnat them to say. i think you did it magnificently.

Really really amazing. 5/5, well done : D
-Suzie

Whoa. I love it. It was short and unquie, very well written and great images. I am a huge fan of dark poems and I really enjoyed it.

Another great poem, i dont know how you do it, but everything i read of yours i love! you are a very talented person. love and luck, mollyjade

This is a nice a poem alot of darkness behind it, almost eery but I liked it it flowed nice and it was good. good Job :) keep it up. 5/5

I love this... It's such a delicate poem. It flows really well and your choice of words was perfect. Well done, 5/5
- Polly

Hey...great poem...it had nice imagery...and it was really dark...i loved it..congrats on getting 1st in my contest...i loved the you poem you entered the moment i read it...and it with-held to be number 1...anyways...excellent job on this poem...5/5....i loved it.

Rustng angels - that's a beautiful way of describing unlived lives.

you have amazing talent and I feel bad having missed your writes all this while.

great going!

peace
shobhana

Ohhh. I liked this one. I love poems that have to do with Angels. I don't know why I just adore them. It was really nicely written with wonderful details.

Very dark, but soooo good i love your choice of words!!! Your an excellent writer!!

I loved this poem, even if it didnt follow the rhyme scheme... the only thing i would change tho is i would take out "up" in the last line... i can't believe how well you write poetry, it comes naturally to you. 5/5