Little Girl Sue

by David   Jul 26, 2006


I knew a girl named Sue,
She lived not far from here.
Everyday she cried,
Everyday in tears.

Poor little girl Sue,
She seemed to be in pain.
Was she being abuse,
Or was little Sue insane.

I sneaked up on poor Sue,
To see what she would do.
But when I heard her talk,
I wanted to see with who.

She was talking to herself,
This little girl named Sue,
As she said these words,
Sue was feeling blue.

I am a bad girl,
I made daddy leave,
I should have not been born,
Should have never been conceived.

I'm sorry mommy,
Please stop yelling.
Its all my fault,
Sue just kept telling.

I tried hard,
I tried my best.
You will see,
I won't be a pest.

I got closer to Sue,
To see what she was hiding.
She had a blade poor Sue,
She had just finished deciding.

Before I could act,
Little Sue just slit,
I held her tight,
But Sue had a fit.
Please let me die,
I'm in the way.
That's what mom tells me,
Everyday.

My heart broke,
I couldn't breathe.
My tears rolled,
When I saw Sue bleed.

I knew a girl named Sue,
She lived not far from here.
Everyday she cried,
Everyday in tears.

Her mother yelled at her,
Sue thought she was to blame.
Poor little girl named Sue,
Today her life she claimed.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow, i am not sure how to comment on this or what to say. this poem is so heart wrenching and sometimes when people leave, you can not help but believe that it is just your fault. I love this poem.!

  • 12 years ago

    by Caitlyn Ludlow

    That is an awesome poem. Very good. Made me want to cry.

  • 17 years ago

    by CrazyCowLady

    I love it and the timing is like what happened on the day and its sad but has a message don't take our life just cause somebody has brung u down

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow!! this poem made me hsiver. I really like it. 5/5 no questions asked.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow this was a really good poem. I liked the narrative style you used. It really did make such a tragic story. It's sad how kids always think they are the reason for bad things happening in the family. It's horrific when they try to take actions into their own hands. It usually ends up in a scenario like this, where they see their life as worthless, and they hope with their leaving, things would get better. You really did write a very thought provoking poem. Awesome stuff.

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