Whoa- That was good It made me think of the song Concrete Angel for some reason not the same thing really but I liked it!
A lot of emoition. Keep it up.

Wow this was a really good poem. I liked the narrative style you used. It really did make such a tragic story. It's sad how kids always think they are the reason for bad things happening in the family. It's horrific when they try to take actions into their own hands. It usually ends up in a scenario like this, where they see their life as worthless, and they hope with their leaving, things would get better. You really did write a very thought provoking poem. Awesome stuff.

Wow!! this poem made me hsiver. I really like it. 5/5 no questions asked.

I love it and the timing is like what happened on the day and its sad but has a message don't take our life just cause somebody has brung u down

That is an awesome poem. Very good. Made me want to cry.

Wow, i am not sure how to comment on this or what to say. this poem is so heart wrenching and sometimes when people leave, you can not help but believe that it is just your fault. I love this poem.!