Did you know

by silent eyes   Jul 26, 2006


Did you know that
i was not there

did you know or
did you simply not
care

did you know i loved
you did you know
that it cried

did you know that
i could see though
your lies

did you know that
i am tired

did you know that i
wish you where
still here

did you know that
you truly did not
die

did you know that
i could see that you
never really wanted
me

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  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I like it. it's an intresting structure, one i haven't used, but it had lots of feeling.

    i don't understand..what did you mean "people still comment"?? Please PM me, I am completley befuddled.

    Lonelynow x

  • 18 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Good poem keep it up... *hugs*

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Hey thanks for your comment. its really appriciated. im glad you like my poems. i like yours too =) i think this one is good. very truthful. i like it =) keep up the good work.
    Much love,
    Tammie

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