As long as your with me then I'll be alright
As long as your here I will win this fight.
[The your's in this should be you're]

Again, this was a really sad poem. It actually reminded me of me and my old best friend, we were always fighting, because I was always unhappy. So I could really relate to this poem, that's why I like it so much. Awesome job hun. Keep it up smile. ily. 5/5

Natalie``

Aww. It's so cute! lol. Great write. I liked the flow, and the rhyming was good. I can relate a lot to this poem, weather it be friends or a guy. Keep it up! 5/5 =) xoxo

Samantha