Very good and true :):)

please comment on my poems i like to have feedback thanx xxx alex xxx

Excellent diction, a powerful story lingered throughout this poem and there is much comparison from this and life itself. You understand the use of atmospheric language and weave it in to this piece brilliantly. Well done =].

God bless,
-Elysium.

P.S: Do read some of my poetry when you get a chance. Please and thank you! =]

What can I say about this one. This poem is just magnificent, but then again, what is so new about that, all of your poems are.

Well done! I've felt what you wrote here, and I think everyone can relate to these misfortunes of life.

Best Wishes
Michelle

Wow kewl poem...

Nice poem....5/5.....i like the ending.. :)..hope everythin is ok....

Again awesome write..so deep and dark! u r too good at dark poems dear!
just love ur work

Wow. Its all I can say...This is amazing! I loved all of it! Keep up the work!

I really like ur dark poems ur words inspire me to write xox

Inside a fragile soul there is still a hope to see
the tide of misfortune turning the other way

there is something so deep in these words - masterful play of words, my friend.

you've outdone yourself again.
peace
shobhana

Does the tide of misfortune turn the other way? I hope so.. You have certainly shown there is hope that it may. Well done on such a thought provoking poem. xx

My my..... you make such beautiful use of words!!!!

Beautiful :)

purva

Great work. loved it, great detailing and everything, amaing. 5/5

"ruining the dreams of tide to wash it away"

That image got to me.
And i liked the use of castle and what it could mean in this poem.
Well done =)
5.5
*Gem*