by Vic Jul 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Pictures have no lips |
by iheartu
I loved the openings you used for each stanza, and I think that the poem flowed really well. Nothing I would change, 5/5! |
by Darien
Wow that was a sad poem. I liked the 3rd, 4th, 5th and 6th stanzas. They were really well written, and I liked the fact that you started out with some powerful words. The rhymes and the flow in this one was great as well. |
by rachelle
So...depressing |
by Natalie
Wow~ |