I think that the message hear is very acute and that it took alot of talent to use the imagry

I agree with this all the way we all talk about loves sweet side but we fail to tell the bad parts of it.... I love this poem keep up the ggod work

I really liked this poem...its pretty good!

WOW!!! this is exellent you have a very pationate imagination ur a good poem writer keep it up xx

Well that was awesome i loved it and as sad as it is to say this the part about thinking it will leave you frail and all that well thats how i feel you just put it into words i love it i gave you a five and i hope you will put out more poems that have the same emotions in them as this one if it isn't to hasselsome you should check out my "junk" i just started so i only have like two poems well keep at it and don't give up

peace, love, dope,
NAYMLIS

I really like your poem, its so expressing...i love it! And i like the way you used words in there too! keep it up...byez

KOOOOL VERY TRUE..READ SUM OF MY POEMZ PLZ

Ur a great writer

Wow, a great poem, its beautifully written, and a very unique and inspriational way to write about love! loved it! keep writting! thanks for your comment on mine... hope you will be able to read some more of mine too.. im sure ill do the same! Many Wishes..Kirsty xx

Once again well written.Sum pretty deep thoghts r in there and I must say, u are truly talented.Luv muches ,cutie

Wow very beautifully written....you obviously have a strong effect with your words!!...keep up the good work:) 5/5

Hey i really like this poem and you just tell it how it is and i dunno i just really like it its REALLY GOOD

Oh My Gosh.
You have a talent in poetry.
I wish i could rite poems that good.
That is a very deep poem.
I like it alot.

xoCourtneyLynnxo

It was kind of good but way to long if there r more ppl like me who are lazy to read you might get no vote or a low vote.

Awesome poem! your a really good poet good work, keep it up

Wonderful poem, a look at how you feel about love. I may have hidden meanings because they arent always what they seem. I liked it and its true everyone has a different view and thought of love. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the comment on my poems means alot.

Oh man, this is true and so good. Are you in love? I was, or still am. My fiance is leaving for college on a scholoriship, and he had to break up with me. But I love this poem. plz read and comment on mine

What an amazin poem!! i totally agree!! keep up the great work!! i'd love to see what you thought of some of my poems!

Geeze ive read a couple of your poems and i really like them all i like your style your an auwsome writer!! thanx for the comment by the way :-)
keep writing your auwsome :-)

U are good girl keep it ^