by Natalie Jul 26, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
Life's simple creation-- |
by Bret Higgins
The full circle aspect of the first and last stanza is something I do myself on occasion, I find it can help to complete a poem and it's nice to see that someone else does too. |
by Biscuit
I like the use of the 'birds and bees', very clever as it is subtle yet obvious when you know what the poem is about! the imagery here is very beautiful and delicate. |
by Biscuit
I like the use of the 'birds and bees', very clever as it is subtle yet obvious when you know what the poem is about! the imagery here is very beautiful and delicate. |
Hey Nat, first of all thanks for entering my contest you did a terrific job, sorry it has taken so long to get comments out i was on vacation!!! Neways this poem was really good its nice to see that you have such a strong bond with your sister as said before!! Thats cool that you get to be an aunt i want to be an aunt!!! ha ha!!! Anyways flow and rhyme terrific another great write!!! 5/5!!! |
by sarahjayne
This is a great poem. and congrats to ur older sis xx |