Hey Nat, first of all thanks for entering my contest you did a terrific job, sorry it has taken so long to get comments out i was on vacation!!! Neways this poem was really good its nice to see that you have such a strong bond with your sister as said before!! Thats cool that you get to be an aunt i want to be an aunt!!! ha ha!!! Anyways flow and rhyme terrific another great write!!! 5/5!!!

I like the use of the 'birds and bees', very clever as it is subtle yet obvious when you know what the poem is about! the imagery here is very beautiful and delicate.

-biscuit-

I like the use of the 'birds and bees', very clever as it is subtle yet obvious when you know what the poem is about! the imagery here is very beautiful and delicate.

-biscuit-

The full circle aspect of the first and last stanza is something I do myself on occasion, I find it can help to complete a poem and it's nice to see that someone else does too.

This is exactly the kind of poem that leaves you feeling content!

The format is nice and easy to follow and the stanzas are not too many and have good proportion.

If anything you could have removed any one from the middle three stanzas and perhaps have a better outcome simply because sometimes less is more.