Medusa

by goddess-glamourpuss   Jul 26, 2006


Although it happened long ago
It has a common theme of woe
For many a woman has been caught
Lying with a man she had not ought

Medusa, Medusa with serpents for hair
When once you were a maiden fair
Contorted with rage your face shall flinch
Enslaving in stone those who dare to glimpse

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  • 18 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Short,sweet and it made sense

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Oh. Very nicely written. I enjoyed reading it.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I love it, very poetic.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Sweet as your worst nightmare*

    Good poem and good rhyme scheme. except for the last two lines... awsome poem though... reminds me alot of some people

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Medusa, Medusa with serpents for hair
    When once you were a maiden fair

    [I think you should change it to "When you were once a maiden fair" ..up to you though.]

    The poem was good though. Your flow and rhyming were great, I felt like it could have gone a little longer, but then again, doing that could ruin it. It was great, keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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