Nice hob sammy-y and im sry i give it a 5/5. plz comment or rate my poems.

So sad.... im sorry u are down.... i am here to talk to if ya need.. i know u dont even know me but still i kinda understand a lil bit... but talking is the best way to get ur feelings out that are holding you down. and writing helps a great deal as well. 5/5

Omg sam do you still feel this way I hope not because I love you don't cut your wrist because you can die i hope you don't feel this way anymore If you do I'll help you
XOXOXO
*~*LYNZ*~*

One thing about this poem that innoticed was the line lenth, some were long and others were short and it didnt flow as good as it could.
But the poem itself was good and it was sad, although the emotions could have been shown more. its a good read though, well done
xxxxx

Wow this is a very dark poem that was full with emotion. i can relate to this poem in so many ways. sad, but a job well done on it. i'm sorry about this too =[. if you need to talk i'm here =] 5/5

~Kristina

This poem was excellent. At first I thought you had been talking about a lover or a friend, but as I got reading it I understood. I'm assuming 'them' refers to booze? Either way, I could definitely feel your soul within this poem. Great job!