The final stanza was powerful, and hard-hitting. As well as the whole thing. 5/5

-Taylor

Omg wow i love it. it made me very sad. i can really relate to it. i kno exactly how u feel. i wonder the same thing i feel the same thign. i loev it. its deep adn sad hto. u have a lot of talent. keep writing and i will keep reading. 5/5
take care
angie

Well awesome...i wonder it writen very clear great job! just keep up the good work and keep on writing poems and i keep on reading it i really enjoy thanks and may god bless u all the time,,like it!

Wow..that was an extremely powerful ending..i loved the last line of the last stanza..it just rose the whole poem to its feet. It's a bit too repetitive but that ending..wow..i dunno..it just really got to me..5/5

Hey, really good poem. The thing that i have noticed because i read nearly all your poems is that most of them are sad and im not sure if its just an easier topic for you to write about or maybe it has something to do with you and what has happened in your life or maybe is still happening but great writing i can feel what is described in the poem. Keep it up. :)

Wow! thats really powerful!!!! well done! i love the repitition, it works really well, although it might be a little overused! Well done though! 5/5
Lov Mez

I wonder the same things, but i dont think ill never know.
wonderful poem tho! 5/5

~Kristina