Wow! that was absolutely amazing! i love the third verse: "Hang me down
From the gallows of heaven.
Let me die, let me shriek.
Shine Godâ??s good light
On my rotting corpse,
See his creation,
See it crumble like my dreams."
how did you ever come up with that? i hope you keep writing, you obviously have a gift.
-Gabby

P.S. thanx for the comment and rate!