by Ebone Jul 26, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I've loved to ball |
I thought this one was on a good track but i think you ended it too soon, you should play with this one some more and see if you could expand the story and topic some more..... but good work so far.... |
by Esther
I liked it!! didn't get the rythm but i ain't good at gettin them! Still i really liked it!! 5/5 |