Who Am I....

by Ebone   Jul 26, 2006


I feel like deep inside I'm dying to cry,
but I'm still unsure of exactly why,
Jesus didn't ask why when he was crucified,
but I know without a doubt he was terrified,
Honestly can someone answer my question Who am I,
Sometimes I feel like I'm going face to face with an unknown place,
It's like I'm locked in a cage,
which makes me so enraged
I'm striving to stay alive,
But honestly Who am I,
Later on in life,
will I end up being someone's wife,
Right now I'm just searching for a light that would guide me to the daylight,
But right now i just need to define the real definition of Who am I.

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  • 18 years ago

    by victoria

    I love this poem..it is so true..i feel the same way sometimes,i just dont know who i am at some points..and i have to say for a 13 year old,your one of the best poetry writters that i know.So keep up the good work...(also check out some of mine).there not that good but i hope you will like them. bye

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*[Screamin On Tha Inside]*~

    I can really relate to dese poem n dats wot makes me like it so much great work

    p.s thanx 4 tha comment

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    I can really feel the emotion as Im reading this well done.

    -Kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by heartbroken247

    I liked your poem it is the first that i have read, and i look forward to reading some more...... thanks for your comment on my poem, did you read any of my others? what do you think?

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    I agree with WokaSaku!!!

    But a great poem!!!
    Very well written!!!

    Keep Up The exceptional work!!!!

    Thx 4 the comment btw!!!
    5/5

    Torm
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