Again

by Nelle   Jul 26, 2006


When you saw my cuts your eyes filled with tears
You wished to yourself that you could help me become strong
You held my hand and guided me through my fears
You put me in the right, when I was always in the wrong

You are my baby, I'm sorry I hurt you
All I have done lately is cause you and everyone pain
I wish I could start over and take back the bad things I do
It is all my fault, I will gladly let you give me all the blame

We are meant to be a team
You are my heart, with out you I would die
You always help me reach my dreams
You are always here to wipe my tears when I cry

Please don't ever leave me, I wouldn't know what to do
Without you my world will fall apart
I will always be here, and I will always love you
You can leave me, but just remember you will always have my heart

So whatever you do with it is up to you
I will love you forever and ever
But, don't just stay with me for me, do what you want to do
If you think I will ever leave you, here is my promise, I will never

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  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Another wonderfully heartfelt poem. I love the way you are able to express yourself so well
    You are so lucky to have such a great friend.
    Although the rhyme scheme was a little rocky it was still lovely

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    You held my hand and guided me through my fears
    You put me in the right, when I was always in the wrong

    ^^I loved those two lines right there. They were GREAT.

    This was such a sad poem, hun. Very well written though. I loved how you worded this. There was just so much emotion in it. Loved it. The end. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Nelle --
    I think that overall, this was a pretty good poem. The rhyming was really good, you`re good with that. But some of your lines ran too long, and some too short. Short lines you can usually get around easily, no problems. But long lines can get tough -- because then it messes up the rhyming. I would take out some of the words like 'always' that repeats several times, sometimes more than once per line. And maybe add some more common words into the lines that are too short. But overall, good job. The intent was very sweet. =D

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

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