My Teddy Bear

by Biscuit   Jul 26, 2006


I want you to know just what you mean to me;
You're something I never want to lose.
No matter what you say or do,
I always want to be with you.

You may not be perfect;
a loose thread here and there,
but everyone has flaws and when you
love something
it can never be replaced.
Even by something better.

What would you do if your favourite teddy lost its fluff?
Say 'Bye bye teddy, i enjoyed the time we had together but its time for you to go"...?
No.
You keep him even though hes falling apart;
even though there are better looking and more cuddly teddies out there.
You keep him.

Well you're my teddy bear and
even when you're not cuddly
I still want you
even when you're not smiling
I still want you
even when you're eyes don't twinkle
I still want you
even when you growl
I still want you
even when I push you out of bed
I still want you

Everyone knows that old, worn, tattered teddies are better than shiny new ones.

You're my teddy bear and I love you.

*for scott :)

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  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Very cute poem, I also wrote a poem having the words Teddy Bear in it. Great job it flowed very well together.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bret Higgins

    It says everything you want it to and that's what counts. No one writes perfect prose every time out but as long as learn from each poem strive to learn from each poem and try something new or make an old theme better next time then you're bettering yourself and your work.

    I liked the simple comparisons. This poem doesn't pretend to be something it is not and you can proud of that.

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    I like how you compared your bf (i think) to a teddy bear. Its true..no matter how old your teddy bear gets you love him even more so as time goes by. And that was expressed really nicely. Its like a never giving up on love no matter what happens sortof thing as i understood...that might not be what u were saying but thats what i got out of it . Its a really good poem dont worry...you're not losing it.=D

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    You are not sure about the poem your self! Girl this poem is good,,, especialy that you used the teddy bear to discribe your love for scott,,, i liked it alot

    Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    THis isn't too bad.. I like the message, at least... But the flow was battered and it just didn't seem there at all.

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

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