Ooo! Terrific write! I loved the way you expressed how you felt in this poem. And you shouldn't be what other people want you to be. It ends up horrible. Just be who you think you want to be. Everything will fold out in the end. 5/5 =) xoxo

Samantha

Steph --
Wow, is this real? If not, you`re very convincing! If it is real, honey, I`m so sorry. I`m always here if you need to talk. =D. The flow seemed a bit forced at some points ;; but overall it was pretty good. You did a great job, 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I like this, it tells a really inspirational story. There is no rhyme or specific rhythm but it flows well and it doesn't just ramble on... lol Nice work! 5/5
- Polly

PS - You commented on my poem "the ballad of urith Trevelyan". St Mary's church is in Nettlecombe in Somerset. And she didn't die the way she did in my poem, that was my imagination! I don't know how she did really die.