by David Jul 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Sitting in the corner, |
by Lisa Carter
Wow i love it. |
Woah!! This is a great poem!! |
by Darien
Wow, that was a very interesting piece here David. I loved how the ideas flowed from one verse to the next. It connected the entire poem, as one. The title of the poem also adds a little extra to it, you didn't even need to question what was going to happen. Also, that last verse was great. It summed up everything you had written and brought those ideas together. Lol, this is just a really cool piece! |