Wow, that was a very interesting piece here David. I loved how the ideas flowed from one verse to the next. It connected the entire poem, as one. The title of the poem also adds a little extra to it, you didn't even need to question what was going to happen. Also, that last verse was great. It summed up everything you had written and brought those ideas together. Lol, this is just a really cool piece!

Woah!! This is a great poem!!

Wow i love it.