I get your point but not many people would....you need to get rid of some of the blurr and confussion....stick straight to your point and nothing more.

october xx

THAT POEM TELLS ABOUT ME SO KEEP UP THA GOOD WORK U REALLY IS GOOD

ANGELA

I enjoy this

Hey nice poem, alot of feelings too =) keep it up

Linds x

Good feeling well done
Better let it out here this where than stupit way!

Wow this poem is soo awsome it relates 2 me soo much...

Wow you write very well, you have a good tallent, ive been suicidal in some of my poems and in real life if you ever need to talk just say, i wont ignore you, anyways good job

Ur a really good poet!!

I love this poem, i've read alot of your work and it's fantastic
love kristen ( my poems are shitt lol )