by Krazy Jul 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
She smiles because he laughed |
by Melpomene
I always like to read peoples first poems on this site to see how much they have improved with there most recents pieces. To me you really have improved from here. An ok piece but to me not as good as ur rest still enjoyed it though. Good effort. ~mel |
by Krazy
Thanks. |
Lovely poem.Keep it up. |