Hush

Dear Kaylee,

I learnt some new words from you. Thanks for the same. You simply rock. Sometimes I do feel from where does a teen like you get such great thoughts. Anyways, 5/5 of course.

I really like this and can see a talent, unfortuantaley i didnt really understand the message u were trying to convey but i like the mystery of it, well done

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Excellent job, if a person really tries to think more on the deeper side, they'll be able to get what you're talking about.
To me: it's a poem about broken love
"Crude unadorned skin
Thirst craved fingertips"
-Reminds me about lust

Grieved rejected-Stained,
Mourned crestfallen sight,
Lacerated soul distressed,
Blackout-Lost recollection (memories that cause sadness and joy)

Again I didnt get what you were talking about but I learned more words *ill look them up in a dictionary later* But the way you used them was great so 5/5

I really liked this poem, it was very different than the stuff I normally read and I appreciate this. Your word choices were emaculate (sp?). The only thing I can criticise on is instead of putting all the periods before "Hush. It's our secret." and "We must never tell." I think that it would look a little bit better if you decided to put them in brackets instead. Other than that I loved this poem. Way to go