Best Moment Of Her Life

by Krazy   Jul 26, 2006


She washes her hands
he sprays her with water
she tousles his hair
and they both collapse with laughter
the way that he smiles
the continuous giggle that pours from her heart
Genuinely happy

They said the two were like an old married couple fighting
this brightens her day, but who knows about him...
he's so good at hiding
what really lies inside him
but she doesn't care
as long as she gets to
hear his voice
feel his touch
see his priceless smile
The only thing she can do
Is Smile.

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Story, again. Although I did like this one better. It had no flow, but the format fits my style much better. =P Good job. Keep it up. =) 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Tormented

    Hey!
    Nice poem! it flowed well n there was a lot of emotion in it! i liked that and the ending was good!5/5

    thx 4 the comment btw =)

    Torm