by Krazy Jul 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
He knows her so well. |
I thought this was more of a story, than a poem. It didn't rhyme (even though not all poems rhyme), it had no flow what-so-ever and it got me confused, yet again. I would suggest trying a simple poem style first, and trying to succeed with it. Your style might improve. That's just me. =) 3/5 xoxo |
by wdnest
This one made me cry! I loved it.... |