Comments : She Loves Him

  • 18 years ago

    by wdnest

    This one made me cry! I loved it....

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I thought this was more of a story, than a poem. It didn't rhyme (even though not all poems rhyme), it had no flow what-so-ever and it got me confused, yet again. I would suggest trying a simple poem style first, and trying to succeed with it. Your style might improve. That's just me. =) 3/5 xoxo

    Samantha