He's special, and She knows it

by Krazy   Jul 26, 2006


As the walls close in, she can only think of where she'd rather be.
sitting next to him.
playing dumb games. just talking.

no damp cheeks.
and when the rain starts to fall
she knows that one word from his mouth
will make them stop.

she longs to be in one his hugs.
a warm safe embrace.
the little things that he does
will bubble up giggles form deep within her

the way she can laugh at anything he says.
the way he always seems to have the perfect thing to say.

he can be serious but still have his lips curved and she knows he has something to say that will make her burst out laughing.

he never fails to amaze her,
by the things that he does and says.
such a mystery she's dying to figure out

and when the walls seem to go faster and faster.
she'll think of him,
and all her worries wash away like the goings of the oceans tide.

tonight, she'll fall asleep with a smile,
knowing that they just had the best time together

he makes her smile uncontrollably. is that good? or bad?

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ok, I'm going to try to be brutally honest...

    I thought that the flow of this was horrible, although I did like the vocab. I liked the way how you expressed how you felt in his arms and such, as well. But I hated the format. It made me confused, and I didn't know what the rhyming scheme was at many points. Just a few suggestions to work on. Hope you don't take it the wrong way. =) 3/5 xoxo

    Samantha