Oh my gosh. I almost started crying. That was so sad. I liked the emotion. Nicely done.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.5/5

(is this true) OMG your great in writting sad poems the feelings was there and anyone who read this may feel the sadness vivid and no loose strings 5/5 again for this one

Geneross

OMG if this is true then it is even more sad. It is beautifully written and also sort of sweet.

I love sad poetry, I hope this didn`t really happen to you. great write.

Gee well this is a great poem, the atmosphere you set was elecrtic! gosh, the poem was fabulous!

5/5 def! David

Wow, that was beautiful.
So emotional.
It kept my attention the whole time.
I really loved the last stanza!
5/5
_AMber_

Very good touching poem.... and its not easy to get me saying that haha but yeah it was a really sad poem i give it a 5/5

Word choice was basic and the flow was a little off but the emotions were great.5/5

The title and the beginning reeled me on and I found myself having to read on but the ending wasn't what it could have been, it just seems to be missing a few words. Maybe you could say 'she callously died' instead of 'she died'. Just seems to end so bluntly. Other than that though good job, 5/5. Em x