Did someone die? Great job. 5/5
-kakashi

Wow, Jessy. This was such a great Epitaph. It's so sad though. Really well done, excellent imagry, flow and rhyming. A brillant piece. Keep it up, hun. 5/5

Natalie``

It was good. But did someone die though.
Gee

That was a great write, it's sad. I hope no one close to you died. :(

Jessy --
On this entire site, I don`t think I`ve ever read an Epitaph! It was different, and I really liked it. The rhyming and the flow was good. Not much to say, beacuse its only one stanza long.. but, you did a wonderful job. Anyone would be lucky to have this inscribed on their grave. =D
5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Good job. There was no rhyming at all, but not all poems must rhyme. The flow was...ok. Not the greatest. Keep up the writing! You're getting there! 4/5 =) xoxo

Samantha

Really good Epitaph. liked the way you rhymed the 2nd and 4th lines.

Beautiful! It was a very beautiful poem, great pice of art! Even though it was an epitaph I wanted it to go on longer

great job
-AnnMarei

Awww very cute... Sad though...

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This should have a higher rating!! Wonderful job, great emotions

Definitely one of the best epitaphs I've ever read. I love the last line, so touching.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

I liked the way you described the person as someone good that used to live, but still lives in the hearts of the ones who loved her/him. I'm not sure about the last line, though.

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Beautifully written, and bitterly sad---Great epitaph though! Keep it up!

I love these types of poems. It didn't ryhme though, but it doesn't have to, cause they are not requiered to ryhme just some do, and honestly I don't care. I enjoyed it anyway.

So sad... Perfectly written, I don't really know what to say...Well done it is great 5/5

Aww this is another one of your sweet ones! I really liked it, it was different!