Comments : I Just Want ToBe Held

  • 18 years ago

    by Deana

    I thought the first three paragraphs
    were really good but then it changed
    somehow. The one liners kind of made me smile , but not as good
    as the beginning.

  • 18 years ago

    by kyliecat009

    Nice imagry!!
    ~kyliecat009

  • 18 years ago

    by Carol

    Thank you guys for stopping in please vote and leave a comment!