Bj, hun I LOVED this...it was Great..it brought tears to my eyes tho but it was emaculent..or how ever you spell it...it flowed perfectly in all honesty i kind of like the ending it fit well...this was amazing...great job sweetie! 5/5

"lend you my ear" maybe wasn't my exact choice, but there was a good rhyming pattern.
In my honest opinion.. um, maybe you needed just one really catchy line. But that really depends on how you want the song to sound.

//T.L.// :-)

Girl.. I was browsing thru poems and happened 2 find Urs. I really needed 2 hear something like that! It lifted my spirit up. Thank U so much!

Girl.. I was browsing thru poems and happened 2 find Urs. I really needed 2 hear something like that! It lifted my spirit up. Thank U so much!

Hey! Great song your a talented writing keep it up! Very inspirational!

-Lost in my past-

BJ --
You did a great job on this!! The rhyming was perfect, and there was definitely a good flow. Write another song -- you`re good at it!!
5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

Hey i loved it keep it up! hope to hear more of them!

Hey i loved it keep it up! hope to hear more of them!

Hey i love ur poem it decribes wat i do

Its not exactly a song...its more like a poem. but a great one. u can make it ryhme less. and put more lines that kind of tell a story..thats wat i do with my songs...