by BrownEyes Jul 27, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I woke up today thinking of you |
by dora
Hey darl a very touching piece. lot of emotion thank u for ur comment on my poem meant alot keep it up xx |
I think it was a great powm, but I would have changed the last line to "a box full of empty dreams" cause you will not forget them, but the dreams are now empty, hollow, shattered by him. g/j |
by Rachel
Wow!! this poem was so good!! i loved loved it! It was short, but so good! You are a good writer!! i especially loved the last line! Good job and keep it up! |